Myth Number Four: The focus of
your resume should be your
responsibilities.
What
nonsense. Focusing on your
responsibilities as an employee
certainly will drive your resume…
right over a cliff.
Check out the following
responsibilities (gleaned from the
extensive Career Change historical
archives), contrast the
responsibilities with the results,
and decide how impressive the
responsibilities really are:
Responsibility: “Directed defense of
West Point against British attack.”
Result: Turned traitor, plot
discovered, escaped country in
disgrace, became a Redcoat.
Employee: Benedict Arnold, General
of the Continental Army:
Involuntarily Retired.
Responsibility: “Master of vessel,
responsible for transporting 53
million gallons of crude oil from
Alaska to California.”
Result: Crashed vessel, dumped 11
million gallons of crude into Prince
William Sound, convicted of
negligence, became a paralegal.
Employee: Captain Joseph Hazelwood,
Exxon Valdez.
Responsibility: “Handled navigation
on solo flight of experimental,
dual-engine aircraft.”
Result: Heading west from Brooklyn
to California, landed in Ireland,
became punch line.
Employee: Douglas “Wrong Way”
Corrigan, Pilot of the “Sunshine.”
Responsibility: “Organized and
directed Grand Armée on the march to
Moscow.”
Result: Left with 450,000 soldiers,
returned with 10,000 frostbite
victims, lost empire. Quel dommage.
Employee: Napoleon Bonaparte,
Emperor of France.
Based on the following resume
snippets, which surgeon would you
want carving into your thorax?
“Responsibilities include cutting,
suturing, and directing OR nursing
staff,” or
“Successfully handled three thousand
mitral valve replacements with zero
morbidity, restoring full health and
vigor to every patient.”
If it were my mitral valve (whatever
that is), I’d pick Surgeon Number
Two.
Jack Welch of GE fame has observed
that the top 20 percent of employees
perform best and earn the most. The
next 60 percent include personnel
with a potential to rise to the top.
The bottom 20 percent were
ultimately dismissed.
What differentiated the three
groups? One thing…results.
A truly impactful and persuasive
resume will focus on your
accomplishments rather than your
responsibilities. Responsibilities
are for bureaucrats and under
achievers; accomplishments are for
winners.